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starryeyed999
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0 posted 2001-05-11 09:08 AM


"Alone and Ignored"

I feel like I'm alone in the world
Although, I know they care
But sometimes when they talk to me,
it seems like they don't notice I'm there.

I wish I wasn't always ignored,
I just want to get my point across the board.
Just like them I want to make a difference,
Just like them I want to suceed.

So, maybe when we're having a conversation,
you can at least act like you care,
maybe once in a while, just acknowledge I'm there.


<*Lacy*>
"I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you."


[This message has been edited by starryeyed999 (edited 05-12-2001).]

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Lakewalker
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1 posted 2001-05-11 09:10 AM


Sometimes listening is hard for people to do, I hope your situation improves.  Good job on the poem

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

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2 posted 2001-05-11 09:34 AM


Great job on the poem, I hope things get better for you.  
Zu

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3 posted 2001-05-11 09:35 AM


Is this about you and your parents?  Well, whoever they are, you have to specify to them that if they don't listen to your thoughts, you won't either.  It's like respect, it should come from both sides.  Good luck  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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4 posted 2001-05-11 09:52 AM


I know how this feels....speak up for yourself....   hugs, SEA
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5 posted 2001-05-11 11:14 AM


this is a hard situation and i hope its not with a love ones..either parents..etc...cause that is the worst...and i went through this...great flow and meaning i got what you were saying.... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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viginia
6 posted 2001-05-11 11:38 AM


well if you ever want to talk to me i promise i won't ignore you    this is really wonderful writing, you expressed yourself and your emotions really well.  i hope things get better for you.  keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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7 posted 2001-05-11 05:34 PM


Aw, Peter's such a nice dude.  
I like this poem a lot because I can relate to it, I hate it when people are only interested in what they have to say.  It gets annoying.
Hope all comes up peachy for you, very soon.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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8 posted 2001-05-16 03:42 PM


I enjoyed the poem very much. I hope things get better.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

AngelPoet87
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Indy
9 posted 2001-05-16 04:22 PM


Well if you need to talk I promise I won't ignore you. Hehe. That situation can be really tough, especially when it is common. But keep your chin up, kay?

"Speak with out offending, Listen with out defending" - Montel

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10 posted 2001-05-18 12:17 PM


i think the poem was a good one.
nothing very elaborate, but just enough to get the point through.

you are taken into consideration  
and if you still have problems being noticed, ask allan for some pointers. right allan?

San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...


HeAvEnS AnGeL
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11 posted 2001-05-18 12:42 PM


Well... This was a gut wrenching poem.  i know the frustration of this all to well.
It hurts when people hear only what they want to hear
but you just have to give them time and tell them how you feel
and then everything will look up
keep your head held high
your pen on your paper
and your head in the clouds  

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12 posted 2001-05-19 11:37 AM


This was such a wonderful poem...one of my fav from u for shur...god i know i've experienced this too many times and its a horrible feeling. ::Hugs:: hun...we'll always care about u!!  
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13 posted 2001-05-19 11:46 AM


hey i know how this kinda thing feels..but dunt owrry whoever they are..theyll come through!!!
          *KiMMiE*

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