Teen Poetry #4 |
alone and ignored |
starryeyed999 Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 35 |
"Alone and Ignored" I feel like I'm alone in the world Although, I know they care But sometimes when they talk to me, it seems like they don't notice I'm there. I wish I wasn't always ignored, I just want to get my point across the board. Just like them I want to make a difference, Just like them I want to suceed. So, maybe when we're having a conversation, you can at least act like you care, maybe once in a while, just acknowledge I'm there. <*Lacy*> "I can only please one person a day. Today is not your day. Tomorrow doesn't look good either. I'll get back to you." [This message has been edited by starryeyed999 (edited 05-12-2001).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Sometimes listening is hard for people to do, I hope your situation improves. Good job on the poem "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great job on the poem, I hope things get better for you. Zu |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Is this about you and your parents? Well, whoever they are, you have to specify to them that if they don't listen to your thoughts, you won't either. It's like respect, it should come from both sides. Good luck "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I know how this feels....speak up for yourself.... hugs, SEA |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this is a hard situation and i hope its not with a love ones..either parents..etc...cause that is the worst...and i went through this...great flow and meaning i got what you were saying.... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
well if you ever want to talk to me i promise i won't ignore you this is really wonderful writing, you expressed yourself and your emotions really well. i hope things get better for you. keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Aw, Peter's such a nice dude. I like this poem a lot because I can relate to it, I hate it when people are only interested in what they have to say. It gets annoying. Hope all comes up peachy for you, very soon. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed the poem very much. I hope things get better. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Well if you need to talk I promise I won't ignore you. Hehe. That situation can be really tough, especially when it is common. But keep your chin up, kay? "Speak with out offending, Listen with out defending" - Montel |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
i think the poem was a good one. nothing very elaborate, but just enough to get the point through. you are taken into consideration and if you still have problems being noticed, ask allan for some pointers. right allan? San, the wise |
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HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
Well... This was a gut wrenching poem. i know the frustration of this all to well. It hurts when people hear only what they want to hear but you just have to give them time and tell them how you feel and then everything will look up keep your head held high your pen on your paper and your head in the clouds |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a wonderful poem...one of my fav from u for shur...god i know i've experienced this too many times and its a horrible feeling. ::Hugs:: hun...we'll always care about u!! |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
hey i know how this kinda thing feels..but dunt owrry whoever they are..theyll come through!!! *KiMMiE* |
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