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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2001-05-10 10:42 PM

Do you think im incapable,
Of speaking on my own?
Words come out of my mouth,
But only in monotone.

Innoncent little girl,
Is how im percieved.
"She doesnt know any better,
So this is what she believes..".

You can all think what u want,
But this is my life.
I can speak for myself,
And what i say will be right.

Im perfectly capable,
Of taking care of myself.
Dont tell others whats right and wrong for me,
Im not a delicate angel on a wooden shelf.

Dont hold me too tight,
Or im bound to slip away.
Guide me from a distance,
And forever i'll stay.

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

1 posted 2001-05-10 10:50 PM

wonderful chic

especially the last lines..i liked it alot! keep posting

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Xeonox

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since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2001-05-11 01:09 AM

Nice piece. It reminds me of the song that goes RESPECT, find out what it means to me.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-11 02:54 AM

great words and how you've written them out...i really enoyed this..great job and keep sharing...i mean like... constantly!..heh just kidding...cya~...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

4 posted 2001-05-11 08:14 AM

great poem Shugar. It was really forceful and to the point and that made it awesome.

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.
Life's tough, get a helmet.

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-05-11 11:31 AM

this is a really nice piece, the title of it reminded me of my own quote

you are a really talented writer, i alwas like reading your work. keep posting

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

6 posted 2001-05-11 11:57 AM

library time!
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

broken wing
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since 2001-04-30

Posts 37

7 posted 2001-05-11 12:16 PM

good job on this. i know the feeling.
broken

"The sun in your eyes made some of the lies worth believing."

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

8 posted 2001-05-11 05:59 PM

Nice work!
It's really good to see you posting again.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-05-14 09:59 AM

beautiful Shugar
that was really good
as Kiley has said already, the last lines are awesome
thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

10 posted 2001-05-14 10:24 AM

Great Job on the poem

and what everyone else said...
Mr mr Zu

" The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson

E-mail/Msn: [email protected]

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

11 posted 2001-05-14 11:22 AM

Good, good, good!! Since this is sorta like the last post I read from you, I'm thinking you're going through a hard time with ppl right now. Ppl can suck 4 sure, but you put your feelings into words very well. I really like this one.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

12 posted 2001-05-18 01:52 AM

Finally a poetic way of politly saying 'back the heck away and give me my damn space' I liked this alot. It's gunna have to go to my library now.

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶ØÊ†<

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

13 posted 2001-05-18 05:37 PM

I didn't much like this one....I think you've done better. As for the message, it was a good one. Like POA interpreted hehe.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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