Teen Poetry #4 |
Stinging Bite |
mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
"Stinging Bite" You have no problem With pointing your blaming fingers At me without checking my word. You jump ahead to believe what others say But don't care about what I have to say. When you finally hear my voice, It's already too late Because you've already set your mind To believing what's false. You see Gossip's face And take it all in so easily Making it your own. When the Truth stares you in the face You turn your head, Surrounding yourself with Gossip's comforting mask. So I lose a friend in the end All to the thoughts of the careless And deadly rumors. My opinion doesn't count So why even listen right? I'll just turn away, Fall back into the darkness where I belong, While you smile smugly And return to laying in the jaws of Gossip, Secretly hoping they won't bite back. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
gossip can destroy people, i definetely can relate to the messae of this poem. you did a great job on this piece and you expressed yourself well. i look forward to more wonderful poetry from you. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Gossip can be really bad, good topic and great poem mistic "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
ah, now hun what happend?? "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
a very good topic you written this poem on...this is true and it does destroy..people tahnks for the read..and keep writing... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Indeed, gossip is a bad thing. Spread the word. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
*spreads it* Well done on the poem. I thought you sent out a good message. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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