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Empty tears Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 64 |
Where are you God? Are you even real? They say God is love But all I see is Hate. There is no love. There is no God. Death is but an escape from loneliness |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Love is all over, you just have to learn to open your eyes  Just keep your faith strong and you shall be rewarded be strong okies? "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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broken wing Junior Member
since 2001-04-30
Posts 37 |
i agree with acire on this. hope everything works out for you. broken "To me, fair friend, u never can be old, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I see precisely what you are saying in this poem, it's one of the things that drove me from my faith. However we must realize that hate is simply a force, flip side to the coin of love. Why must we discriminate against it just because it's a negative force? Ok well this discussion isn't going to happen, as initiated by me... so I'll just say good poem. Hope you find the truth for yourself sometime soon. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
never say that there is none..cause even tho...i havent found him yet..never say that...cause he is there why would you talk about someone that doesnt even exist..so think about it...as i struggle with my faith...but on the wya dont lose it...keep writing..  ...? |
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Wood_Stock Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 58The little yellow |
Wow. Such a simple set of words. Yet they send out such a powerful messsage. I was never a believer. If not to believe in god, then believe in yourself. It's all there is. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you'll find Him....His love is all around you,just waiting for your embrace.....if you focus on hate....that will be all you find....focus on love |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Everyone questions God at some point... I hope you realize that this world has hate and sadness in it, but it is caused by people, and their destructions... God is somewhere.... One day you will figure out how you feel. Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good poem. I enjoyed the view point...but there is love around....you just gotta find it i guess.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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