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knightlyshadows
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0 posted 2001-05-10 01:43 AM



this is for my scarlet. i love you.

TO ME
you are more then words
more then these emotions
you surpass this existence
limitless in yourself
you make the sun seem dull
everything is uncomparable


TO ME
you are all


“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell


[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-10-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
anonymous albert ?
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1 posted 2001-05-10 02:55 AM


this was a very nice poem...definitly a great tribute..thanks for sharing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-05-10 09:51 AM


Aww, this is sweet Tiffer.  
I'm sure Scarlet feels the same way about you.  Can't wait 'til she gets a chance to read this!  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

banburycross
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viginia
3 posted 2001-05-10 12:58 PM


This is really sweet, short and beautiful    anyone would love to have this poem written for them, i like this a lot.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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4 posted 2001-05-12 04:57 PM


~*applauds*~
very good Tiff
just some spelling check would be nice  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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5 posted 2001-05-16 06:52 PM


Hey this was very sweet!
awwww

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

cheerleader_gal4life
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6 posted 2001-05-16 11:40 PM


Nice Tiffany. I bet Scarlet will love it. Very nice. You guys are good at poem writting. I have no talent what so ever in writting. Hehe. Oh well. Anyway. Keep up the good work.

God Bless,

Cherish

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