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Wood_Stock
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since 2001-05-09
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The little yellow

0 posted 2001-05-09 08:47 AM



- Words -


Words with meaning,
Words without.
Words that evoke emotions,
And words that evoke doubt.

Words that bring us together,
Words that rip us apart.
Words from a friend,
And words from the heart.

Words that make you think,
Words that make you sad.
Words that make you happy,
And words that make you mad.

Words to show what you feel inside,
Words to be heard by all.
Words that make you feel important,
And words that make you feel small.

And through it all we need not,
Speak a single word.
For what we have together,
Need not be spoken to be heard.

© Copyright 2001 Noel Wilson - All Rights Reserved
vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26
Posts 495
East Haddam, CT
1 posted 2001-05-09 09:36 AM


Ooooh another very good piece by you!  Words are definitely a diverse topic to write about and you did it well.  Great job.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

banburycross
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viginia
2 posted 2001-05-09 12:07 PM


i am really enjoying the first pieces that you've posted in here, you are a talented writer and i'm glad you are sharing with us.  i liked this piece, i hope you keep opsting and replying.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Suga_Baby
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Maine, USA
3 posted 2001-05-09 12:54 PM


This is really awesome!!  

,
Suga

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

anonymousfemale
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Posts 2797
Limbo
4 posted 2001-05-09 01:01 PM


I've been totally lazy and haven't read any of your pieces but that's all about to change!!

It's a funny thing about words. They seem to do all these things. Nice piece. So nice that it is going into my library.

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

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Lurking
5 posted 2001-05-09 02:03 PM


Very good piece well done  
Zu

lonely*soul
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6 posted 2001-05-09 02:36 PM


i like this one...lotsa words..hehe...anyways. good job   keep on posting..b.c its the first ive seen from you  
           *KiMMiE*

Lakewalker
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On the streets w/ people
7 posted 2001-05-09 04:43 PM


Good job on this, the end seemed to conclude it very well.

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

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8 posted 2001-05-09 05:49 PM


thsi is awesome as all those words can be heard as one and its "poetry"great job i really liked what you were doing in this poem..keep writing

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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9 posted 2001-05-11 05:22 PM


I'm astonished by how good this poem is.  I'll be looking for you the next time    
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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10 posted 2001-05-16 02:15 AM


Well done....i enjoyed this poem. Looking forward to more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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