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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Hey there everyone....im alive and still kicking....and biting...lol. im here once again...after i think awhile. seeing lots of new people. here is my post.... The Kiss As We Know It The kiss as we know it is something that only lovers know the power, the beauty the darkness and the light Places of feather softeness worlds a quaking energy This kiss brings about anger and happiness rekindling out flames of desire The feel of this body against mine Slow rythms of hurried breath Hazel and green eyes close at the feel of a kiss The kiss only lovers know the intensity stops catches my breath The insanity of those who do not know the kiss of lovers The kiss as we know it fades away while bodies are tangled Only to come back with lazy fingers......... Regina Wow this one is garbage.....yucky!!! well whatever... "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i didn't think this one was yucky, i liked the imagery in it. i'm glad your back with us and posting again, i hope you stay around and keep sharing with us. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, I am glad your back! I really liked this poem and its going into my library. Until your next Masterpiece (oh my god I have been spelling masterpiece wrong this whole time) -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked the way you wrote this... "rekindling out flames of desire The feel of this body against mine Slow rythms of hurried breath"..  hehe..jus kiddin i thought this was a very good poem.. keep writing   ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Well I didn't think this was yucky... it was really good, certainly not garbage but not one of your best. Mr Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Oh I really liked this one, dont you dare sare its yucky!! It's really good and I loved the way it made me smile at the end!  ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
THIS IS NOT YUCKY i think its very good..and emotional..and truthful...anyways good job *KiMMiE* |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WOW!!! Now I wanna be kissed  good to see you again Regina keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Acire heres a kiss (kiss, kiss) lol thank you all for replying... its great to be back!!! missed u guys Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Can I have a kissie too?  Anyways you may have disliked this one, but I honestly thought it was pretty good. The real impact for me lay in the ending statement, it made me go "whoa, good wording." I love the last statement most out of this poem.  Nice to see you back, Regina! We all missed ya!  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Not your best, but the part of lazy fingers really caught my eye. I thought you did well on the poem, but I have come to expect a bit more from you hehe. Maybe I'm spoiled. Anyhow, well done!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
HEY EVERYONE!! LOOK!! *points at Regina* She's back! Yeah, she's back and biting too!! lol For starters I love your pic. Very cool. Now the piece itself is very nicely done. Mmmm...kissing...  There is only one thing better and it sure as hell isn't going to be typed here! Ahem...anyway, wonderfully written with just enough emotion.~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
oOOOOoooOOOooohh...Very nice here...The ending was pretty dang kickin..... ~Carly "I'll take in anyone who's taking off their camouflage..." ~Third Eye Blind~Camouflage |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Regina, that was cool. The ending is really awesome. I would say good to see you back, but I haven't been here to not see you(sorry). SO I guess good to see us both back. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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