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I Must go on
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I Must go on |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL 
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“I must go on” My pain encompasses all With each movement I feel the torment Of my soul Trudging foreword Through hells fires Ignoring all petty desires Feeling the pain ripping at my heart This feeling I cannot ignore A surge of strength At thoughts of you I must go on Moving onward Past the icy hearts of man Trying to give a helping hand While the pain tries to hold me down My pain I bare is not all my own Taking the pain of others And moving on again Despite the pain Fighting of the pain I tried bare to much of it How good it would feel to rest To take all this and just let it go would be so easy But I will not let it break me I will not be taken down For you my love I must go on. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. I've learned that even when you [This message has been edited by LoneWolf (edited 05-07-2001).] |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
what some ppl will do for love! awsome poem for sure..and its written well too!! *KiM* |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I love the thoughts in the ending stanza, this was quite enjoyable!  Well done.~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this. Well done on the poem. You must go on! Good way to see things.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
wow, wonderful poem, nice format *L* -=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=- |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job on the poem..i enjoyed this a lot...thansk for the read...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That was a really good read. Well done. keep em coming "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This had a positive tone to it...im glad you decided that u must go on wether it be for yourself or someone else..the important thing is that your goin on (if that made n e sense lol ) |
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