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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
As I grow older…I realize… I’ve come too late To a world too soon Where love has fallen And hate has overwhelmed Floor sheeted by dying souls And feelings remain unknown Twitching Bleeding Aching Crying Screaming Falling And vicious cycle No antidote exists People killing others Fallen and broken bodies Upon the floor My heart breaks for the souls The one I lay here with I remember Before A world of pain Where none was before Demons within Haunt the world Leaving an abyss Of betrayal Deceit Love Lust Hunger And death… All the makings Of what lies within *Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference* |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Sometimes this world is just one, big, messy place to be. I have faith that the good will come and hopefully shed some light in the grey. Nice poem.  xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
The world can be an awful place sometimes, can't it? The good thing is that there is also a lot of good in it. Strong, powerful words here, I really liked this. You're very talented! *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome back Jessica! It's great to see you again! This is a very heart-wrenching poem filled with expressive emotion ... hugs to you, and glad you popped back in! Best wishes, /Kit |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Hey all!! Jenn~Thanks hun! I knwo I can always count on you for your inspirational words. I missed ya girl, glad to be back. Krista~Most definitely can!! Thanks for the words of wisdom and encouragement, I have missed that the most about this place. Kit~Thanks so much for the warm welcome back. I look forward to my new stay here. Hopefully it won't be interrupted again. Once again, thank you all for the warm welcome back, I missed it here sooo much. Best wishes to you ALL! *the expected escape is only a portal to true devine Hell...leave that door alone* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This poem was extremely negative. I loved it though. I thought it tocked because I agree with a lot of what's going on in yer poem. These times seem to be horrible in the world. All this chaos.....nice one here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I do agree with Alwye Sometimes, we just take the good for granted that's why we don't see it and just notice the bad seems like it's only the bad that opens our eyes to reality great words/thoughts Jess nice to see you again don't leave us again  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
I understand what ur sayin here. Growing up in a military family and having lived in some larger cities i've seen the decay of society first hand, and it really is a waste. But i think it goes beyond taking for granted...but the future always holds a happier day, excellent piece, i connected to/understood everything you said " How can i feel if i can't breathe..." - Godsmack |
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