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Morouxshi San
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0 posted 2001-01-21 07:43 PM


many of you may not know but allan and i are ok.
nothing big, we talked and decided that Xenogears was a excellent playstation game but that the ending sucks.


Forethought:
Somebody said "crap comes in nice packaging", i definetly agree. i own an imac.


-=infomercial=-

never before seen beauty
is not sold in stores
if you act now
youll get more than before

its so simple to use
you wont beleave your eyes
youve got nothing to lose!
well give you a prize!

call now!
rush delivery available
3 easy payments
will make it manegable

as seen on tv
has never been harder to beleave
but its not a lie
dont let this chance pass you by.
-San


afterthought:
good products dont need to be oversold. think that next time youre buying whatever over QVC, or when you meet somebody thats just throwing him/herself at you.


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

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Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-01-21 08:55 PM


Felipe, nice one here.
Who would throw themselves at me? HA!!!
I talked to mariola, told her the whole thing. She won't fall for me.
Good wrapping comes in nice boxes, and nice boxes hold crappy gifts. Welcome to Walmart.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

StarPryncess17
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2 posted 2001-01-21 09:43 PM


NEVER before have I heard such truth
The best things don't need to be sold
You have made an excellent point here!!
My advice: lose the Imac and get a PC!  
Thank you for the wonderful insight
~*~Jessica~*~


*Being an angel doesn't mean having a halo or wings, it means doing the right thing and wanting to make a difference*



jeremydraul
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3 posted 2001-01-21 11:28 PM


good topic... a serious congregation of words came together strongly to worship this poem... beautiful job..

~JDR

"Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood

IsGona
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4 posted 2001-01-22 01:00 AM


Great poem... so true
And yes imacs are beautiful.  and yes they are crap.  
~Jason

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

StarPryncess17
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6 posted 2001-01-22 03:55 PM


Look Supertone...I'm only going to say that what you had to say was very disheartening and straight up RUDE. Quote: [edited out] please, do take your "beautiful iMac Fred" and get over yourself. My god, I was only kidding about the iMac, hell I own one. But your rudeness has made me ponder my return, as well as the niceness I have shown to you. Only to get in return the rude comment.

[the original response you referred to and the quote from it have been deleted from this thread Star Pryncess, the author has been notified directly]

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*the expected escape is only a portal to true devine Hell...leave that door alone*


[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 01-22-2001).]

Allan Riverwood
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7 posted 2001-01-22 03:57 PM


I'd like to apoligize on the part of Dave...
He sometimes gets out of hand, but he's only joking around...
Learn not to take him too seriously and you'll get along just fine.
But he does need to grow up.
-Allan

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8 posted 2001-01-22 04:03 PM


Oh, and the poem?
^_^
Loved it!  It's true what you say, good products don't need to be oversold...
A nice afterthought...
-Allan

Morouxshi San
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9 posted 2001-01-22 06:16 PM


i own a pc.
never liked apple.

imacs suck, but g4 cube's are nice.
there situation solved.


San, the wise
San, the dumb
San, the guy...

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