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We must not be logical, for logic will kill.
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We must not be logical, for logic will kill. |
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Carly and Allan New Member
since 2001-04-28
Posts 5USA/Canada 
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There are 25 school busses in outer space most of which are filled with lemon rinds the lemon rinds of death haunting me...haunting me... HAUNTING ME! ahhhhh and the the poetry of the past joins the rinds in taunting me taunting me, taunting me...... TAUNTING ME OH MY and forever singing praise to lemon pie pie is for billiards. and billiards is for apes now put away the lemons and get out the (grapes would be the logical choice..) but we must not be logical, for logic will kill. kill the lamp! kill the streetlight! dim it to a steady buzz fuzzy worms caress the shrine and the slippery ones shine vamos! [This message has been edited by Carly and Allan (edited 05-05-2001).] |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
HMMMMMMMMM!!!!! |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
HMMMMMMMMM!!!!! |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Oh my! This is DEFINATELY creative and humorous! Thanx for the laugh and good work yet again  "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
:::shakes head in a scared way..and leaves....forever::: ive had enough of you guys crazyness *KiM* |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
OH, here they go again... CArly and ALlan...dum dum dum dum dum.... Great work again guys.. I liked it a lot..had a good laugh.. your other poem i enjoyed more..but im sure there are some more to come! -Jeff |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i think this poem was creative...but when i first read it to be honest i didnt find the humor in it so i read it over and i think you guys did great on that part of the humor in this poem...hope to see more my poetic friends..hehe i be trippen again hehe..  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-06-2001).] |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol i likeds it muchs!!!!!!!! lol made me laughs  cant waits to cs more from yas guysas!!!! tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
heheheh..this was, in all illogicality, "laughing" ROTFLMAO waiting for the next one...QUICK!! "Life is not long and boring, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hehe this was amazing. I thought this was very creative. I completely enjoyed this poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is cool! I loved the rather surrealistic imagery of this piece. I think I will add this to my library. It's one of those poems that seems to tickle something inside of me, lol. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Haha! Very creative you two. I enjoyed this --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
remember that one time when i had gone done said that the two of you should work together more...? well see, now i'm worried this was a great laugh and wonderfully creative, great job you guysSometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ok peoples, here's how we wrote this one... Carly and I were bored, she just out of nowhere said "say something interesting." So I said the very first thing that came to mind. (like free association.) She was pleased, she responded... we got an idea. What would a poem be like if it was written entirely by free association? This is the result. Thanks for your replies everyone! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Haha...you two are very odd...but come out with great pieces. For that, I WON'T pick on your weirdness.  ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I was expecting one like the other duet you guys wrote. But, still an excellent read  keep it up both of you"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Haha, very creative and amusing, you two! LOL. I did enjoy the read, although it does worry me a little... haha. Thanks for sharing! --Marie "You're the girl of my nightmares. |
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