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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
i swore id never get hurt again yet you're hurting me now you seem to be telling lies that never end how can this be, just how? you say you love me yet you never call you're so blind why cant you see? it hurts to be left alone, to fall i swore id never get hurt again yet you're hurting me now *~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~* |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
This is very good. i like it a lot... this really popped out at me, i can relate. if this is a true poem then i think you should give this to the person. Lots of times we're scared to give things (such as poems) that we write to people out of fear. we're afraid that they will leave us. but in fact it opens up their eyes... but i'll shut up now *L*  Good Job!!  Valerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow..i like this alot..and sumtime ya just cant conrtol that which sux mucho...ya know? good job *KiM* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
How can you swear to not get your heart broken again? How can you say to yourself that you won't get hurt again? Believe me, that's uncontrollable.....good poem though.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a nice poem. I really liked the last two lines, it made the poem very powerful. Nice work. --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job on the poem..i thought this states your feelings well..nice poem..and keep writing  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I disagree with Javier, it is possible to prevent yourself from feeling this way again if you are careful of who you grow attached to. Nice work on the poem. I look forward to more as well.~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I agree with Dopey, no matter what, it's not in your control. ~*hugs*~ though "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
It sucks so much to be hurt, especially when it's by someone who you think cares about you. Just be careful and don't let this person continue to cause you pain. I wish you the best. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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