Teen Poetry #4 |
for you |
knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i could never say i love you enough i could never show you how much i care i could never be with you as much as i want i could never be away from your side just know that ill always love you just know that ill always care just know that i long to be with you just know that i want to be by your side just know that i do love you just know that i do care just know that i will be with you just know that i will be by your side i love you “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is creative, TiffAy... and very beautiful. Wonderful job. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
im getting the feeling you love this guy...hehe good poem!!!! *KiM* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on this one tiff. Hope to see more! Quite sweet! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Faces_Of_Death New Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 2Heaven's Parking Lot |
COOL!!!! I liked this one.. thought it was well written.. -Faces "It wasn't me, it was the one armed man!" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really like this Tiffany. I really like the creativity you've put into this piece. Nice work. --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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