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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
I once had a fish for what I wished and wished I won him and he was mine But only would take a little time I went to bed that same night and woke up with a fright my fishy had gone on to a better place so now my fishy is singing amazing grace this is a tribute to my fishy who died and was one day old. :o( bye bye. *~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~* |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'm sorry but I laughed, the last line was so cute. What a nice tribute to your fishy, yes indeed he's now singing "amazing grace." Haha  Sorry to seems so insensitive, but that line really cracked me up. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
no i have to disagree..sorry allan  i thought it was a nice tribute..you did it so well..as i thought the last line was very creative..thansk for sharing and keep writing   ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
that was really cute...i remembered the 2nd day i got my hampster...it died..i cried and held a funeral for it lol...i was littler hehe *KiM* |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
awwwwwws i understand completely *hugs* ive had a bad time with pets  i had 2 gold fishies that died on me....then my doggie gots ran over and kilteded on me 11th bday *cries* and then my birdie broke its leg and then the leg turneded black..and it ate its leg off then diededed toos i buryeded it under a bush in me yard.  it all goods tho! cheers up cuz u gots us! tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Sad, but the fish is in a better place. Hope you get another one that lasts longer!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is really cute! Ditto to Javi.. it's in a better place  Thanks for sharing! --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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