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Unforgetable but forgotten
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broken wing Junior Member
since 2001-04-30
Posts 37 |
Lost in fiery night Found in glorious abandonment Taken to places unheard of before Taken to places unfathomable Swept up in the sensations Captured by your passion Fooled by your charades Tricked by your lies Hurt by your deeds Unforgetable but forgotten "The sun in your eyes made some of the lies worth believing." |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, broken, VERY nice work. I enjoyed this a lot, it flowed nicely, and the ending was very powerful. I like this! Well done, I look forward to seeing more. --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Nice work... you seem like someone I know. NM Great one. Keep posting Don't turn your back on the future, you have nothing to look back on..... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well doen on this one. A pleasant read!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Wonderful last line! Great work on this piece, I did enjoy it.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
oh wow..i didnt get the whole title till the last line (but i think thats the point lol) neways good *KimmiE* |
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