Teen Poetry #4 |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
Shifting light Black and blue Hiding inside yourself Contagious hypocrisy Holding your tongue Lying eyes yourself Finding faults Taste of blood Heartfelt honour yourself Continuation of Deprevation and struggle Honesty hurts yourself “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” U in the dark u in the pain u on the run Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-03-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked this poem... it was on the more serious side which i liked... good job on the poem..keep writing and wheres ben?lol ![]() ![]() if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Allan Riverwood![]() ![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice work! A serious poem, and you did it all yourself. ![]() ![]() ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very nice work, Tiffany! I enjoyed this. Nicely done. --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this. Very powerful piece. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This can be said to be one of your best poems. Well, at least one of my favorites of yours. You did really good on this one. Thanks for Sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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