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Teen Poetry #4

No, I Never Loved You...

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

0 posted 2001-05-02 09:15 PM

No, I never loved you,
But the seed was planted.
It could have grown-
That’s what I wanted…

The seed is now starved
And it will never grow.
But whether it will survive,
Only time will show.

So long since you’ve held me,
I miss you so much.
I want to kiss you again.
I need to feel your touch.

Oh what I’d give to see you.
I’d settle for a simple smile.
To get back in your life
I’d walk many miles.

No, I never loved you,
But I cared for you so greatly.
And you are the one
I’ve been missing lately.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-05-02 09:28 PM

I miss you too

Great poem. I liked it and hope things get well for you!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-05-02 09:58 PM

Sara, hope things do work out for you. You're a great person and you deserve happinness. I appreciate your sharing with us your inner most feelings again. Glad to see you in here again. Thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

3 posted 2001-05-03 12:38 PM

this is really beautifully and heartfelt, thank you for posting this. i really hope that everything works out for you. keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-05-03 01:03 PM

This is a very well written poem. You have beautiful thoughts that you shared here. This is a difficult situation, and I hope things get better.
Nice work.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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