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broken wing Junior Member
since 2001-04-30
Posts 37 |
i held it all in i let it build up i threw it all at you for no reason at all i hurt your feelings i did you wrong i wasnt a good friend im sorry |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Wow... short but powerful... I've been on both sides of this one. Keep 'em coming! Jenn "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
It's ok.....stuff happens. You will be forgiven. Just learn from it  Good poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I like this! It's short, but very well written. Nice work, I hope to see more. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice work. Very short and to the point. Hope you were forgiven. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
this is a great write, you packed as much feeling and power into eight lines as i think you could have. great job on this piece, i look forward to more of your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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