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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
late last night i tell you true i was acting like such a stupid fool out i went with friends to party and never in my wildest dreams would i think of these things we did first we went bowling simple enuff then to denny's late night snack i sat with these guys from work at my job you see they ordered food but i was broke so i watched my tummy growled and i drank lots of water and being the fat man i be they dared me to drink syrup all three well i took a swig od strawberry then another and another until all gone then they said ' ben that great you the man' 'drink the blue berry bud gulp it down' well me being me and dum as i be i drink part of it down woooweee but me is kinda weak i cant take the berry so over to maple i switch in a hurry and down my hatch it goes where it stops nobody knows well i drank it all down and got super sick and i puked up the prettiest display of colors you should see my friend lots of red it was kinda pretty in a gross sick ole way oh well i went home and slept and here i am today sick as a dead dog and just arg it wont go away ok i think i am going back to the toilet i will be back soon if you dont hear from me send out the army cuz i prolly fell in and i write this as a warning never ever ever ever ever ever ever ever let me do this again and to all you crazy ppl out there you dont do this either ok you will get sick and most likly die i almost did bye bye have a great day *runs off again to puke* i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
<~~~~~ lookies guysas i passed 200!!!!!!! o yea babay! lol *does the go me dance* :p newayz........ lmao *is gonna kill matt and ken for darin u to do that * arg @ them! and dork u best not be plannin on takin em up on that offer of a prize.....well i dont mind the nite out or w/e just u best not go to a strip club with them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  lol dork u should of known betters but tis all goods  u already hurled most of it out of ur system  lolsi love you ben gets betters lol tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” "at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet" [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-02-2001).] |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
um okay |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
right!  ben...good job on the poem.. i hope you never ever ever do it again! keep writing:superrgin: if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Erm.....this was weird. I wouldn't ever do that anyway....so yea hehe  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I really love the title! Awesome title!  |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
sometimes i ask my self...WHY? (nikki. hehe) how did i find you ppl??? cute tho.. *KiM* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Heh.. cute, Ben. I like this. Nice work. --Marie Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oooo damn! I guess it's a lesson for later on, don't drink the syrup, just take it in spoonfuls mixed with sugar. THEN you will be on an all sugar trip and boy are they fun! Nice work.  ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
heyz that wasn't true was it? me hopes not anywayz it was good. u seem to b talking about dieing alot bud that no good loves ya from me scarlet as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u. |
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