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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Forever In Love My only expense is I can't see Can't see love when it hits me Forever and ever in all infinity Love is stored deep inside of me She makes my heart flee My love for her is stronger than me I told her my feelings that were inside me And at that moment I was set free But it was too late for me I waited to long and left her be I don't blame her for not waiting for me I hope next I will be able to see See love when it hits me Forever and ever in all infinity Love is stored deep inside of me I wrote this poem because I didn't tell this girl how I felt and when I did it was too late, and for people that can relate to how I feel. "It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all" ~Unknown |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
First off...WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Im so happy that you joined us!! Great first post....love can be tough but if its all for the right person, its all worth it. Great job and i look forward to reading more from u!! |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Thank you. "It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all" ~Unknown |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions! I really liked the way you wrote the poem. I have never been in this situation. I am more of the type that seizes the moment when I can.....but.....I did learn about this by watching my friends go through it. I've also experienced situations SORTA like this....when I was younger I never told anybody anything about who i liked and so on. so the girls kept on coming and going. ANyhow, welcome to passions and I hope to see you reply and post a lot here. ENjoy your stay and watch out for acire, and allan....they tend to be a little reeeeerish.  Oh and if you'd like go to TEEN EXPLORER and check it out.....there's cake there....or at least there was....we think Walt ate it....but hey.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to passions!! this is a good first post and one that many people, myself included, can relate to. keep writing and posting, i look forward to seeing more from you. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS....hope u like it here and i liked the poem and DOPEY w'sup wit the cakes and chips and stuff i never seen any? anyways keep writin |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I'd watch out for Dopey more, he spreads lies about cake and things. we all know he ate it. Your poem was very good, it potrayed the emotons well. Nice job, post some more "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Wow, I know exactly how you feel!! BELIEVE ME! ad thank you for osting this. I was lucky enough to get a second chance 3 years after I lost my obvious chance...be happy witht what you have, and learn rom what you're feeling. No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Thanks for the warm welcoming. I think im going to like posting here!! "It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all" ~Unknown |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
 Welcome to Passions! This is a good poem. I hope you stay for a long time in this Family of Friends Ok, so that was corny, but welcome and I hope to read more from you.--Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
welcome to passions!amazing poem! canadians rock! regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!  Yer gonna luv it here...I know we all do! This was a great first post...ah love..*sigh* But one thing, I thought the constant rhyming of the same thingy was a bit much. Welll..see ya 'round!~Carly Many miles behind my eyelashes, there always seems to be |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Welcome to Passions this is a nice start keep this up and you will be great here I know you will like it. -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Ahh, I thought I already replied to this.. OOPS.  I think this is a really great poem. It expresses your feelings very well.. though I'm sorry this happened to you. Great job, Keep posting! (and WELCOME TO PASSIONS!  )*The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.* |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ah, quite the interesting poem here. I read your other, and I must say that I like this one quite a bit less than your other one. I think it's because of the rhyme scheme on this one, it gets a bit old rather quickly. Maybe it's just me, don't hate me for being the crytical one... you'll soon learn it's just my place in here. Welcome to Passions in Poetry. Check your email for a special greeting on our behalf. ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
WELCOME, WELCOME, WELCOME! Wow, there was a lot of "e" sounds... I'm starting not to make sense much... good poem *claps* well done *claps again*... |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Glad to see you decided to join us. Hope you enjoy Passions in Poetry as much as we do. Happy sharing and reading too I can see you'll fit in just right already great post keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Thanks all. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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