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Poet on Acid
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2001-05-01 09:27 PM

I don't really know what this is about, it was another one of those that kinda wrote itself. And I really don't know what it means.

Dreams of hell
nightmares of heaven
twisted worlds
unbearable to view
unstoppable to see
leaving a bitter taste
and a harsh sound
blinding darkness
deafening silence
twisted visions of life
perverse illusions of the world
blood traces your eyes
tears lace your veins

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶ØÊ†<

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-05-01 10:22 PM

Well you don't know what it's about and YOU wrote it....so i had no clue haha.
NIcely done though....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

chas
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 101
Lynn, ma

2 posted 2001-05-01 10:25 PM

Humm……..chocolate

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

3 posted 2001-05-02 09:45 AM

A really thought provoking piece. i don't really know what it's about but the wording is beautiful and some of the lines are just incredible. this is going into my library for more thought at a later date. keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

4 posted 2001-05-02 01:33 PM

Great work!!!! Your stuff.......is awesome.

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-05-03 05:22 PM

Wow, POA. Another piece that really made me sit back and think. Very nicely done! These are beautiful thoughts. Thank you for sharing.. keep posting!

--Marie

Don't ever be someone's slogan, because you are poetry.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-03 05:33 PM

*thinking*
i liked this poem alot
interesting contents
and i also wrote some poems i dont know myself
haha...yea..great job
and keep writing