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Teen Poetry #4

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grey::tears
Junior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 19
lost within my mind

0 posted 2001-05-01 09:16 PM

i go so many places in my head.
i travel far distances,
and crawl into tight corners.
it takes me from life,
and releases me from the grasp of reality.
i know i am not moving,
but i feel the wind in my hair
and the ground beneath my feet
i feel arms around me
telling me that its ok
and that im safe
nothing can get me in my head
nothing can take me away
and lie to me
nothing can scare me and push me away
nothing can lead me down a path and not bring me back
no one, nothing, can get me in all the places i go
nothing and no one,
no one but myself

A.K.S.
"Never fear something, just because you don't understand."

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-01 09:20 PM

i liked the meaning behind this poem..
and who can tell whats on a poets or ur mind but you the poet or urself...very true in my opinion..
nice job..and keep writing

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-01 10:25 PM

This poem was great. It made me think of what *I* think about when I want to get away from things....i think of shooting up in the sky and flying....like....at night....over the ocean with a full moon beaming onto the water and me rising up above a layer of clouds and seeing the light on it.....so refreshing and relaxing....hehe sorry

nice poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

chas
Member

since 2001-04-08

Posts 101
Lynn, ma

3 posted 2001-05-01 10:26 PM

Humm……..chocolate

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