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Teen Poetry #4

No Way Out

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

0 posted 2001-05-01 08:59 AM

Sorry I havent posted much lately, I've been kinda busy. And I've had writers block. But I finally found a cure, and I'm back.

I feel like I am sitting all alone
In the middle of a million things
None of which I am part of
Like I am simply an observer
Of all the Hate, Pain, Revenge
But only for an instant
Because in reality
I am very much a part of the tangled web we weave
One so tangled that no one can escape
And once I am caught in it
All I can do is wait
There is no looking back
No holding on
No way out

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow. I feel kinda sorry for it...

HappyPretender
Junior Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 38
Prince George, VA

1 posted 2001-05-01 09:19 AM

Very good post. You'll find your way out eventually. You just need to pull yourself out of that web.

<3~*Rachael*~<3
*we can't become what we need to be by remaining what we are*
~About all you can do in life is be who you are. Some people wil

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

2 posted 2001-05-01 10:21 AM

Caught in that web of life, eh? I know the feeling. I agree with you that there is no way out, but if you try really hard maybe you can escape through one of those little holes...Good work, I like the metaphor.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico