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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl 
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Someone to bring you flowers, Someone to make you smile everyday, The one who makes you feel like dancing, Someone to kiss in the rain... The girl who knows you all too well, Although you pretend she doesn't. The one to make the gray turn blue, Your other half, Your soul... Look no further, Because now she's found, Right in front of you, Here I am... |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
kissing in the rain is the best. i like this a lot i've really enjoyed all the pieces i've read by you, i hope you keep posting your work, you write beautifully. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this had some emotion towards a person and a person that should know i hope u gave this poem to the person u wrote it to jenn .. great job on the poem... keep writing..cya   ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Wow, I must say I never thought I'd hear Jenn writing about soul mates be here I am. A nice change of pace. Such beautiful thoughts Keep em up Jason |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow........wow this was great. Awwwww I just loved the ending. I could picture a girl saying this to me.....wow...so sweet.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Wow this is a cute poem. Nicely done. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you everybody. Yeah, Jay... this is a bit different, I wrote this while having a discussion with my ex, he was just trying to tell me that there is still romance out there... etc... and that I shouldn't just give up on it all. "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww.. very nicely done! I enjoyed this. It's so sweet  I hope you give this to him... --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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holatuwol Member
since 2001-04-27
Posts 72California, USA |
This poem is so cute! *_* Aww... hehehe! I don't know why, but this poem is just half-perky and half-cute, and yet for some unknown reason, it seems filled with longing and innocence. Talk about a sugoi mishmash of emotions and impressions. ^_^v Now this poem I really like! hehehe! *steals the poem and stuffs it into the library* I'll return it later, I swear! ^^v - holatuwol |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
awww this is major cutish good job... *KiM* |
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chas Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 101Lynn, ma |
Humm……..chocolate |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ummmm, thanks for your replies. And...chocolate? What? "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
OMG!!! Simple but so elegantly said. I'm really amazed by this one Jenn This shows that poems are great even when worded in simple form ~*applaud*~ "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Thank you Acire... That means a lot. "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You are very welcome "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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