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sleepymoongirl
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

0 posted 2001-04-30 12:08 PM

forever conflicting with myself
finding it hard to love who i am
y should anyone else love me
when i don't know y to love me myself
life seems messed up
trying to carry the burdens of the world
well trying to find the inner me
a me i will never find
a me that is bleeding within
everyone sees me as strong
all i can see myself as is
weak helpless lonley afraid
i am surrounded by people yet i'm all alone
i have the the knoledge yet to helpless to use it
afraid of everything cuz everyone will have it out for u in the end
not knowing what to feel not knowing who i am
or who to be or how to act
what is me?

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-04-30 12:17 PM

Hmm... the title is a good one, the rest of the poem was very thought-provoking. And the last line is also a brain-poker, good way of ending this off.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

2 posted 2001-04-30 12:26 PM

i love you scarlet! ur me scarlet

lol
goin to me library hunnay.
know that im here for u when ever u may need it.
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

3 posted 2001-04-30 12:27 PM

ugh and of course i forgot to hit the button!
all allans fault! grrrrrr
lol tiff again!

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

4 posted 2001-04-30 10:23 AM

This was very introspective, and I must confess that I often think about the same things reflected in this piece. To a certain extent, it's sad because you seem so unsure and confused. And I know how that feels and do not wish for anyone else to feel that way. I don't really think anyone knows exactly who they are, and that's ok because you don't need to know that right now anyway...But this was good, and I felt like I could relate to it alot.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-04-30 10:07 PM

You're not messed up! You're just going through a lot of stuff most of us have gone through....and if they haven't yet, they will

You'll be fine in the end. Just keep that head up....I enjoyed the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-05-09 12:50 PM

We all go thru the questions of who we truly are. You're not alone on that one. just stay strong and on day you'll finally realize the truth in you.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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