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knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-04-29 08:16 PM

if i fall in love with you
you dont have to love me back
just the thought of you being there
maybe that will be enough...
enough to get me by.

see, i know that you may not love me
but just so that you care
maybe that will be enough...
enough to get me by.

when i fall in love with you
you dont have to love me back
just you there holding my hand
maybe that will be enough...
enough to get me by.

because i understand that you may not love me
but just to have you here with me
maybe that will be enough...
enough to get me by.

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2001-04-29 08:31 PM

OMG!!!!!!!!!I loved this ssoooo much! It's going in my library!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-29 08:33 PM

I liked this a lot, but do you really think you can get by with unrequited love?
It's a toughy, but anyway VERY well done on this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

3 posted 2001-04-29 08:50 PM

I did like this one very much... it's nice to see something very serious from you, for a change.
If yous ever gets too sadlike, dos have some chikin.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-04-29 11:47 PM

I forgot to add this to my library!

Whoopsie!

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

5 posted 2001-04-29 11:57 PM

i really love this poem tiffany it is very sweet and this poem will never be how you feel cuz i do love you back

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-04-30 12:21 PM

Oh Tiffy girl.....

this is wonderful!!

SEA

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-04-30 02:19 PM

i really liked this..
my fav by you so far..
great poem
keep writing

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

8 posted 2001-05-09 12:22 PM

Situations like that can hurt, that's all I have to say about the message. The poem is very well written. I appreciate you sharing it. Thanks for the beautiful read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

9 posted 2001-06-21 11:53 AM

OMG Tiff. How did I miss this one. I know it's like 'old' but I liked it! Btw I'm goin through all your posts.

If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care... ~John Lennon

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

10 posted 2001-06-21 04:05 PM

Wow, Tiff. VERY nice work! I enjoyed this a lot. Keep sharing all your work with us.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James

Yezea, your Angel
Junior Member

since 2001-06-08

Posts 11
Canada

11 posted 2001-06-21 05:43 PM

Hi Tiff ! I really liked this one

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

12 posted 2001-06-21 08:02 PM

this was beautiful~a song maybe? It brings back memories of things for me, thank you

Wonderful read..

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

angel_2401
Member

since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

13 posted 2001-06-21 09:42 PM

This is tooo cute. I love this one!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

Cinch01
Junior Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 14
RS, BR

14 posted 2001-06-21 10:48 PM

Good poem. I don't know how someone can be ok in a situation like that. I know I can't. But that's just a thought. I guess it can be possible. Well, good job. Keep writting, I'd like to see more from your work!

"Love like yuo never been hurt, live like today was the last day and dance like no one is watching."

Love's Addiction
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 57
all around you