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An Angel in Flight (senryu)
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An Angel in Flight (senryu) |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg 
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all my life I've searched but now that i have found you we unite to fly |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
sweet... whats going on here... and your locked in that senryu mode.. your so good at them now ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
Yeah joined enough to not reply to my IM's haha |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hmm i've never seen this kind of poetry but to the looks of it you've mastered it...great piece of poetry..i'm gonna go read your others now..i like this style "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good one here again allan  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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GirlsBestFriend Member
since 2000-12-27
Posts 71Planet Earth |
this is meaningful. go on! ~lotsa luv "Isn't it funny how to the world you are nothing? But then to one person..you're the world" |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
Allan, I cant help but smile and cry at the same time. Wonderfully done. It is to bad not everyone here knows what it truly feels like to be An angel in Flight. Fly on Allan, And reach for the stars. Better yet be the stars for all to see. Keep writting and flying high. Ps. Dave, of course he was!! lol< !signature--> look forward,But forget not the past for it has brought you this far~by Allan and Amanda [This message has been edited by Angel in Flight (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
senryu is like the words of wisdom keep sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Good job of writing this one man. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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