Teen Poetry #4 |
how will it turn out |
CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
i sit here in silence waiting for a reply waiting for some indication that everything will turn out ok i watch other people they go through the let down they thought that everything was ok it wasnt how will it turn out for me? i see yet others heads bowed in knowing defeat they get their answer they are suprised and overjoyed how will it turn out for me? i sit back try to breath try to control the shaking in my hand but all i can think is: how will it turn out for me? finally my time has come i collect myself to recieve my fate i look at the piece of paper i passed ~anyone who has ever not done too well in a class can understand where im comming from with this one i really dislike recieving tests, especially when i know ive done bad on one. i tried to write it so that you would want to know what i was talking about throughout the whole poem, and in the end its not as serious as you thought tell me how it worked? thanks i am blinded by the silence of a breaking heart... i cant see myself |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Good lord child! It was all serious and stuff....ugh. . Nice job chico Te amo, Bel |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
The ending was quite a surprise to me. Your little scheme worked in that respect. I know what it's like to be anxious over a grade, and you describe it really well. Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This endeavour was a success, you certainly caught me off guard. Very well done. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Smlie4u87 Junior Member
since 2001-04-28
Posts 16 |
Hey that poem is so good. I hope to read more be you. Always, Tracy |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
It was good. I liked it. Not your best though. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Whoa this was such strong emotion over getting a test back..but im not criticizing it in anyway cuz thats what i was like this morning for my bio test but i got a 91!! yay!! LoL Im glad you passed =o) |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey this is good, i havent seen much of yours so i cant compare but good keep it up. |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Haha, you caught me really off guard there. But great poem all the same! |
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