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i see her there
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i see her there |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i see her there sitting all alone shes looking out before her but she doesnt see what i see shes lost in her own thoughts not seeing what i see looking out before her sitting all alone i see her there “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Just wondering, are you talking about yourself in tehis poem? Well, it was a great one. Keep it up! *~*Amanda*~* |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
no its not about me. “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice... well organized, the format is interesting. Reminded me of cinquain, in a way. But better, way way better (*doesn't like cinquain*  hehe) Good job. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol@allan *found out wut a cinquain was* lol:P thanx for the replys guys  much appreciatedtiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” "at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet" [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 04-29-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I really enjoyed this poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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