Teen Poetry #4 |
You and I |
sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
You'll never know how much you mean to me you'll never now how much I care I feel al of these feelings but for you they just arn't there I try to tell you everyday just exactly how I feel but I guess I'm afraid you just won't know how to deal with all the feelings that I'm feeling You don't know how it kills Everytime I see you I just want to cry I almost feel like I could die I wish you could just see we were meant to be "You and I" (This was written about a guy[couldn't tell could ya?]that I really like and I am having a BIG prob telling him!!! HELP! I know it's been a long time but thanx for replying!) *~*In 3 words I can sum up everything about my life, It goes on*~* |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
this was great, but what kind of advice are you looking for? Obviosly people well tell you to TELL him!!!!! Duh! hehe.....so do it....find a good way though. Anyhow, i liked the poem a lot. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked it.. i think u should jus give it chance wit the emotions u shown in this poem..] i think is enough for any guy.. good luck on ur situation and great poem! keep writing ...? death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Aww... the best thing to do is just come out with it... tell him "You're so cute and fun to talk to, we should get to know each other more... wanna hang out sometime?" You know, something like that... Just be brave... if you don't tell him you will always ask yourself "what if...." and you don't want that! Best of luck to you and very good poem "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Geeeee I wonder who sweetypie could have written this one about....HhhhHHHhhhhMMMmmMMMM....j/k! You know I know already anyway. Well I feel ur pain, can we say Mandi & Aj??? I really don't know what to say about it that I haven't already said...well I LOVED ur poem, keep up the AWESOME work! Lotsa Luv, Cilla ~*~SuMdAy U'll CrY 4 mE bUt I wOn'T cRy 4 U, sUmDaY U'll MiSs Me LiKe I MiSsD U, SuMdAy Ull nEeD mE LiKe I nEeDed U, sUmDaY U'll lUv Me BuT I wOn'T LuV U~*~ ~*~You can fall from the sky, You can fall from a tree, But the best way to fall, is in love with me~*~font> [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 04-28-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I say feed him. Ask him over for dinner and cook him a huge meal. And then tell him. He'll love you if you fill him with food, it's the law of nature. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yes, I do say tell him. However difficult it may prove to be. Love is full of risks...I regret the ones I never took. "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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