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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL 
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“Will You” Will you ever realize That you’re the only one for me I still don’t understand How can this be? Will you ever know That its for you that my heart beats? I feel so alone How could you leave? Will you ever know That I love you Of course not... Because I never told you. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
beautiful...(sniff, sniff) wow! i havent read much of your poetry but i liked it the best. Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
The ending is awesome. *hands Regina a tissue* There there girl... Emotional poem, Wolf. You made Ina cry.  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Awwww *sniff, sniff*...This is very well-written and I like it alot. It's always important to tell ppl how you feel about them, because sometimes they have no other way of knowing. Keep writing.  ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Ooooh I like this... you really shouldn't keep your emotions all bottled up... people need to know how you feel about them! "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
hey this was really good. Very well done....  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Awww! That's such a wonderful piece! I love it! Thanks for posting it and it's going in my library. No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This poem was pretty good until the very end...then it totally rocked! lol I loved this, I can relate. "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
This was sooo good! i absolutely loved. especially the last line... that was the clincher. i love it. great work. I sooo relate to this!! Valerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Hey this is very well written good job. |
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