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LoneWolf
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0 posted 2001-04-26 11:29 PM


“Will You”

Will you ever realize
That you’re the only one for me
I still don’t understand
How can this be?

Will you ever know
That its for you that my heart beats?
I feel so alone
How could you leave?

Will you ever know
That I love you
   Of course not...
Because I never told you.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

I've learned that even when you

© Copyright 2001 Colin Heffernan - All Rights Reserved
Ina
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1 posted 2001-04-26 11:31 PM


beautiful...(sniff, sniff) wow! i havent read much of your poetry but i liked it the best.

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-04-26 11:59 PM


The ending is awesome.  *hands Regina a tissue*  
There there girl...
Emotional poem, Wolf.  You made Ina cry.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

vixengrl04
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3 posted 2001-04-27 11:13 AM


Awwww *sniff, sniff*...This is very well-written and I like it alot.  It's always important to tell ppl how you feel about them, because sometimes they have no other way of knowing.  Keep writing.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Suga_Baby
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4 posted 2001-04-27 07:18 PM


Ooooh I like this... you really shouldn't keep your emotions all bottled up... people need to know how you feel about them!

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

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5 posted 2001-04-27 10:00 PM


hey this was really good. Very well done....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Elvenblood
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6 posted 2001-04-28 08:27 AM


     Awww!  That's such a wonderful piece! I love it! Thanks for posting it and it's going in my library.

No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee

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7 posted 2001-04-28 08:52 AM


This poem was pretty good until the very end...then it totally rocked! lol
I loved this, I can relate.

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

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8 posted 2001-04-28 10:56 AM


This was sooo good! i absolutely loved. especially the last line... that was the clincher. i love it. great work. I sooo relate to this!!

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

branden726
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9 posted 2001-04-28 11:55 AM


Hey this is very well written good job.
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