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Love For Her |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA 
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Its all so weird The feeling that is After all of it The fighting The lying The break-ups The getting back together But, yet I still love her Why? There is something about her About how she and I work We talk We listen We understand We care We are there When needed I love her more than anything We all have our ups and downs We all have quirks we must accept And I have accepted all of her And she accepted me I have the feeling I know its there I wish one thing though I know its a scare But all I wish Is for three words I love you *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a very well-written piece. It's strange when you have problems with someone that you obviously have a connection with, but when you can work those things out and still be together, it just proves the strength of the bond. Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
Well, i guess i should say we arent together because of our having to rebuild our relationship, but i hope we can get it back up to the place we both want it to be at *Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
hey great poem...it's nice when you find someone that you totally love and can work things out with...kinds of connections everybody wants "It's better to burn out then fade away" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice one here. I liked this one a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I guess no matter how compatible we are with the person we're with, and no matter how much we accept each other's flaws, it doesn't mean the relationship won't have problems at all...I guess that's reality thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice! It's sweet, but so sorrowful... Like a lot of love poems. I like the way you put it together though. Hope to see you post more! -Allan |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like this poem, it's done really well. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
great poem. i think many people can relate. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Relationships suck. They force you to see the flaws in yourself, and in the other person. And you also have to see that no matter how much you care for a person, or no matter how much you want it to work, there are two possible roads: 1) You two just aren't soulmates, you'll have to live with that truth. OR 2) It just isn't the right time for you two... and you must wait until you can both grow. By then you have to hope you still like one another.  Anyway.... this was really well written. Keep them coming. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA |
Wow...thanks everyone... all your comments have made my day*Blonde people are normal. Everyone else is just strange. -Ender* |
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