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knightlyshadows
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0 posted 2001-04-25 08:23 PM


ive never meant 'I LOVE YOU'
like the way i mean it with you
ive never said 'I LOVE YOU'
like the way i said it to you
ive never been IN LOVE
like the way i am with you
ive never been THIS HAPPY
like the way i am with you

i am yours
you complete me
i am nothing without you
you make everything right again
i love you
I LOVE YOU

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-25 08:27 PM


sweet poem..
i hope everything goes alright
wit u and ur relationship
keep writing ..

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

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2 posted 2001-04-25 09:41 PM


Very sweet!    SEA
AngelPoet87
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3 posted 2001-04-25 09:43 PM


Aww!!!!!


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4 posted 2001-04-26 12:01 PM


I felt that this was quite powerful. The caps really do add a lot of feeling within the poem. Your statement was well received and i hope all goes well with you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

luvnkris
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5 posted 2001-04-26 02:09 AM


Hey, that was really nice!  
Luv Jo xoxo

* never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you*



Godsend_1
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6 posted 2001-04-26 01:23 PM


baby this is beautiful  you have such a talent i love you dearly i hope you know my feels for you mimic your poems to a letter your perfect in  everyway tiffany we will soon be together and i  hope it will be forever your the greatest person ever i love you

ben redshaw the great and now deeply in love

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

Godsend_1
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7 posted 2001-04-26 01:23 PM


oh no a double post *smacks self*

[This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 04-28-2001).]

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8 posted 2001-04-26 08:52 PM


Awwww!!  This was so sweet!  
NIce work.. I really liked this  

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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9 posted 2001-05-07 06:35 PM


I hope you do actually tell the person this  
thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

lonely*soul
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10 posted 2001-05-07 07:16 PM


wow..i liked this!!  awosme job..extremley sweet too!
          *KiMMiE*

Allan Riverwood
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11 posted 2001-05-07 11:00 PM


I love you too, Tiffers!  Thanks for the tribute!  
knightlyshadows
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12 posted 2001-05-07 11:19 PM


allan   tsk tsk lol
*is tellins carlAy*   jk lols
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

U in the dark u in the pain u on the run
Living a hell living ur ghost living ur hell

stace_co2003
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13 posted 2001-05-12 01:11 PM


that is soooooooooooooooooo sweet!! great job girl!! keep it up!  
catch ya later
Stacy

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