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~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams 
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In our Hands we hold our hearts. Hand in Hand we'll never part. Take my Hand, take my heart, too. I take Yours, to wed, I Do. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Ooh, very nice.  What a sweet set of words. Hang onto this one...~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh wow, this was completely sweet!!! Very nicely done. I enjoyed it a lot!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Beautiful description of the joining of love... I really like this one. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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MoeRocko Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 166West Virginia |
Cool one Short and Sweet Nice choice words |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This was great. Short, but to the point. Keep it up! *~*Amanda*~* |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
beautiful, lovebug |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is lovely! |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Short but sweet and very beautiful. Well done. Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
cool short and sweet just they way i like it you are like super sweet babe keep it up *hugs* ben redshaw the great and now and forever totally in love i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Awww that was short and very sweet almost made me cry :’( just kidding J this is a very nice poem. Until next time -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
awww *sniff* i liked this very muchs! im addin this to me library *looks at ewok* i want me sox u dork!:P tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
Short and sweet and excellent emotions..I really liked this one ~Nikki~ |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very sweet and expressive! It's a challenge to write a powerful poem that's short, but you've done a great job here! Nice work. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Not alot of words, but definitely a lot of meaning. It's sweet. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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