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fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

0 posted 2001-04-24 12:44 PM




i lurk in the shadows of the dark night,
i am a creature who evokes the emotions of fright.
i once was alive, but now am dead,
living in this world with the need to be fed
the blood,
the blood which gives me life.
in this world of cold creatures of the night.
i prey on any human within my sight.
i feel my lips widen into a humorless smile as their soul take flight.
into heaven, the place i shall never go.
for jesus christ doesn't take pity upon
the evil creatures who hide from the light.

any help would be appreciated! :-)


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fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
1 posted 2001-04-24 12:46 PM


oops, sorry 'bout posting this one twice lol
-fear

cherish
Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........
2 posted 2001-04-24 01:34 AM


woooooo hooooo!!!
WELCOME TO PASSIONS Melyssa !!!!

that was a GREAT first post!!
keep them coming..

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Bishop
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since 2001-04-22
Posts 30
Nottingham, England
3 posted 2001-04-24 02:11 AM


This is great.  Keep it up!

^*Bishop*^

*Evil has many faces, and I'm one of them*

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2001-04-24 09:20 AM


This poem has been locked due to duplication. I f you wish to respond, please do so in the other thread with the same name 'Lurk' . Thank you.~SEA
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