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0 posted 2001-04-23 05:02 AM


Baby let us slow it down for a minute or two
So we can talk about things we disagree on
And make our love feel bran new
Close your eyes, take my hand
And I’ll show you everything you don’t understand
No let us reach for the stars
And let out love spread out far, so open up your heart
Let your emotions out set your soul.

Babe can’t you see, we’re meant to be
You make my heart fall so deep
We always love so strong
That’s the reason we’re holding
The reason we can’t go wrong
Baby can’t you see, we’re meant to be.

Baby I am listening to what you have to say
Just say what’s on your mind I’ll be here
Beside you each step of the way
Baby don’t speak, just lay down
And let’s make love that makes the world turn around
I’ll be your shoulder to cry on
When ever life do you so wrong, so open up your heart
And let’s take one step at a time.


© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-24 03:15 PM


It's smart to figure things out before you continue being in a relationship. Always converse with your partner about problems/issues and so on....hope all works out.
Good poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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