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knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

0 posted 2001-04-24 12:32 PM

why do they want to hurt themselves?
what goal are they tring to reach?
do they think itll make it go away?
the hurt, the pain, the suffering

SCREW YOU for trying to cheat...
for taking the easy way out
for taking all of the short cuts
and leaving me nothing but heartache.

SCREW ME for being so selfish...
for wanting things to be perfect
for wanting things to be like they were
and not being able to make it better.

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 04-24-2001).]

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-04-24 02:04 AM

Haha...... hahaha I really really like this. How powerful a pair of words they are, the ones in caps!

Great job!
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-24 09:44 PM

I really thought this rocked.....the caps just hit me.....like HARD>......BAM!....it was amazing. very well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-25 07:10 PM

The caps really added to the eotion you're putting in this. This is a good vent, huh?

We all need that once in awhile.. Nice job!

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

4 posted 2001-04-25 09:12 PM

Well now! Way to make your point with those words *LOL* nice job

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

AngelPoet87
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

5 posted 2001-04-25 09:50 PM

Yah I agree with them, great job with getting your point across. Lol. Good writing.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-04-26 01:11 AM

hehe....nice job on the poem.
i really like it!!
keep writing

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

7 posted 2001-04-26 02:04 PM

Hey,

Wonderful poem!!!! great reading keeep them coming

Until your next

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-04-26 06:27 PM

awesome poem

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