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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-04-23 02:27 PM


i have an obsession
youll think im strange i believe
but i must teach you this lesson
itll give me much relieve

spoons and forks suck
and i love my sporks
they give me good luck
but now u think that im a dork

lol aight this was done today cuz i was bored!

tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"at the touch of love anyone becomes a poet"

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
MindlessPoet
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1 posted 2001-04-23 02:48 PM


lol.. interesting.  

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me.  The Weird One.

Godsend_1
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since 2001-04-19
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great state of illinois
2 posted 2001-04-23 04:21 PM


go baby sporks rule lol i love you hun mucho lotso and it was super cutish hun *hugs*
you have inspired me to write a spork ballad now to so ppl keep watch
ben redshaw the great

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it

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3 posted 2001-04-23 08:12 PM


Heh..
Interesting!
Bored poetry is always fun!  
Thanks for the read!

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Allan Riverwood
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4 posted 2001-04-23 09:06 PM


Very good!  I see wonderful symbolism in here and I'd like to say that there are a lot of people who feel the same way that you do, and if you ever need someone to talk to you can talk to me.  
Wonderful job.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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5 posted 2001-04-24 09:32 PM


a spork?
a spoof?

ok well this was nice.

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6 posted 2001-04-29 10:03 PM


i thugh it was a forpoon?

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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