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Celebi
Junior Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 17

0 posted 2001-04-22 08:25 PM

The dove takes off beating its beatiful wings

It flys through the sky on silver wings
to reach the heavens

But it will never reach

not untill its soul rests

~Celebi~

sleepymoongirl
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 157
bc canada

1 posted 2001-04-22 09:04 PM

that was short sweet and beutiful.

see even hobbes likes it ^he tis danceing likes dude and so is the baby below sorry if i apear to be weird its probably cuz i am

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

2 posted 2001-04-23 01:02 AM

Someone likes graphic images.

The poem was very intriguing, shorter poetry allows someone to stop and ponder the meaning for a greater amount of time, I really appreciate your style.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-04-23 03:09 PM

It's a challenge to write a poem that is both good and short. You did very well with this.
Nice job.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

4 posted 2001-04-23 04:02 PM

Beautiful thoughts here, my friend. I was never able to write a short poem, and you pull it off wonderfully. I'm envious! Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli
Blame Canada!

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-04-23 04:39 PM

ey!
thats similar to my poem

hehe..jus kiddin

and i haven't seen u around here
anyways keep writing

and bout the grapic things moongirl..
kinda gettin played out LOL!!!!
nahhh i was jus kiddin there also

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-23-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-04-24 07:57 PM

Some good images here. Very enjoyable read.
Hope the soul finally rests.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

7 posted 2001-04-24 08:12 PM

Nice quick one that gets to the point, thats always nice. lol. Anyway, good job.

~ali

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