Teen Poetry #4 |
i love you |
CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
i see your eyes gems set in that beautiful face glittering in the light i love you we lay on my bed we talk about past and present and future i love you we talk about our lives whats right and wrong i love you we talk about colledge i worry i want to be with you i love you everything is polotics does anyone ever care what we want sometimes i doubt it i love you i wounder if everything will work out or will we go our seperate ways i love you i love you ~jus some thoughts bout stuff thats been goin through my head, jus felt like gettin 'em out let the fighting words lie |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this. Good job. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
cool poem don't doubt what is there. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
I love you too mi amor. I was thinking about writing a poem too , looks like we have the same track of mind. Like I told you earlier, everything works out in the end. I promise. Te amo...siempre, Bel |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Made me think of a situation I'm currently in. Well done. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice job on the poem.. much enjoyed thanks for sharing and keep writing ...? death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
*bump* So Jobethel can see! Bel |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
hey hey hey! CLBinLove w/my odd natured computer friend that was sweet...as always! hahaha good poem..lotsa issues...good! ur thinking! something i dont do often! wel kt *ahem* i mean BEL i had already looked for it and read it earlier but didnt have enuf time to reply hehe! SWEET! ~ jo ~ btw clb do u know someone name daniel stetson? |
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