| Teen Poetry #4 |
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i love you |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
i see your eyes gems set in that beautiful face glittering in the light i love you we lay on my bed we talk about past and present and future i love you we talk about our lives whats right and wrong i love you we talk about colledge i worry i want to be with you i love you everything is polotics does anyone ever care what we want sometimes i doubt it i love you i wounder if everything will work out or will we go our seperate ways i love you i love you ~jus some thoughts bout stuff thats been goin through my head, jus felt like gettin 'em out let the fighting words lie |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed this. Good job. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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sleepymoongirl Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 157bc canada |
cool poem don't doubt what is there. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
I love you too mi amor. I was thinking about writing a poem too , looks like we have the same track of mind. Like I told you earlier, everything works out in the end. I promise. Te amo...siempre, Bel |
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Allan Riverwood![]()
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Made me think of a situation I'm currently in. Well done.~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice job on the poem.. much enjoyed thanks for sharing and keep writing ![]() ...?death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
*bump* So Jobethel can see! ![]() Bel |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
hey hey hey! CLBinLove w/my odd natured computer friend that was sweet...as always! hahaha good poem..lotsa issues...good! ur thinking! something i dont do often! wel kt *ahem* i mean BEL i had already looked for it and read it earlier but didnt have enuf time to reply hehe! SWEET! ~ jo ~btw clb do u know someone name daniel stetson? |
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