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CLBinLOVE
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since 2000-06-04
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Hilton Head, SC, USA

0 posted 2001-04-21 10:15 PM


i see your eyes
gems set in that beautiful face
glittering in the light
i love you

we lay on my bed
we talk about past and present
and future
i love you

we talk
about our lives
whats right and wrong
i love you

we talk about colledge
i worry
i want to be with you
i love you

everything is polotics
does anyone ever care what we want
sometimes i doubt it
i love you

i wounder
if everything will work out
or will we go our seperate ways
i love you

i love you


~jus some thoughts bout stuff thats been goin through my head, jus felt like gettin 'em out

let the fighting words lie
let the candle light die
let the sun come up
let the same imply
~EvE 6


© Copyright 2001 Craig Baker - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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1 posted 2001-04-21 10:55 PM


I enjoyed this. Good job.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

sleepymoongirl
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since 2001-04-19
Posts 157
bc canada
2 posted 2001-04-21 11:07 PM


cool poem don't doubt what is there.
Isabel Galaxia
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3 posted 2001-04-21 11:39 PM


I love you too mi amor.  I was thinking about writing a poem too  , looks like we have the same track of mind.  Like I told you earlier, everything works out in the end.  I promise.  
Te amo...siempre,
Bel

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4 posted 2001-04-22 02:21 AM


Made me think of a situation I'm currently in.     Well done.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

anonymous albert ?
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5 posted 2001-04-22 04:30 AM


nice job on the poem..
much enjoyed
thanks for sharing
and keep writing

...?

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Isabel Galaxia
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6 posted 2001-04-23 05:54 PM


*bump* So Jobethel can see!  
Bel

ethel lahootie
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since 2001-03-06
Posts 143
SC, USA
7 posted 2001-04-23 06:30 PM


hey hey hey! CLBinLove w/my odd natured computer friend that was sweet...as always! hahaha good poem..lotsa issues...good! ur thinking! something i dont do often! wel kt *ahem* i mean BEL i had already looked for it and read it earlier but didnt have enuf time to reply hehe! SWEET! ~ jo ~
btw clb do u know someone name daniel stetson?

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