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MindlessPoet
Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 106
Texas

0 posted 2001-04-21 01:37 AM

I didn't like this one as much as some of my other.. but other people seem to like it, so I might as well post it.
Nothing Too Powerful

when joy turns to sorrow
and happiness fades
when the only thing visible
is the frown on your face
when nothing seems worth anything
and you feel you don't have worth
when the only things you want
can't be found on this earth
God is still here
and He still loves you
no matter what you've done
or what your goin' through
nothing is too powerful for Him

*TiMMYBoY*
Yeah, that's me. The Weird One.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-04-21 01:47 AM

thats true as people say 2 me i myself am strugglin 2 find out if that is really true
thanks for sharin a poem on a different subject..keep writin

death is not the greatest loss in life. the greatest loss is what dies inside us while we live. -norman cousins

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-21 02:19 AM

Very well done! I like your spiritual tone to the poems. I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

3 posted 2001-04-21 03:11 AM

i liked it very much i think it is hard for ppl to think that God loves them but you need to i will keep an eye out for you work ok later

Angel Bee
Member

since 2001-01-30

Posts 176
Virginia

4 posted 2001-04-21 11:44 AM

this was good. I liked it. Keep writing!! :o)
~ab~

*~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~*

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-04-21 12:19 PM

Yes, nice job. I'm with Al, still on the search for the truth myself. But it is nice to see so many people taking comfort in their religion like this.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-04-21 12:44 PM

Very nicely done! I REALLY enjoyed this. I loved the spiritual tone, and the ending was awesome. This is a very truthful poem. I'm glad that you know that He's there whenever you need Him.
Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

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