Teen Poetry #4 |
in dedication to allan! |
princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
Heres another LOVELY poem dedicated to my great buddy allan Though his hair has turned to grey His skin wrinkled every where; I still love him,as before; and let him know I care. Though his teeth are not his own His hearing not the same I will listen carefully; when he calls my name Though his pace is slower now His mind is not as keen I will cherish fondlely; all we've done and seen Though the years have changed him He's not what he used to be Time has changed alot in life; except his love for me. hmmm i didn't know what to write bout you so i made this one.. lol |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
*rocks back and forth in his chair* Those darned kids, writin' poetry like theys owns tha place... Hey what are you talking about??? I'm not old! Hehe... this made me laugh, so I like it! ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
allan r u sure ur not that age isn't that ur grandson's picture in ur profile.... hehe.. lol..but yea this was a nice poem keep writin |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ha ha...i love it careful Allan, your teeth might fall off lol j/k awesome "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
hahaha!! I'm not going to let Allan forget about this one! Hair.. teeth.. hahaha! Very nice, Sarah! Thanks for the laugh.. I needed that tonight --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Allan the old fart......haha Great tribute! |
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