Teen Poetry #4 |
Sit Down |
Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Sit down, Hun . . . There’s something I have to tell you, Don’t be scared, please, don’t be sad. Here, take my hand, hold onto it, Will, I have to let you know . . . It’s nothing bad, I promise you, So can you smile for me please? I’ve known you for awhile now, And each day the love deepens. I’m slowly moving on, Please bear with me now. I know it annoys you, And I’m sorry for that. I’m doing better now, A smile starts to show. But what you don’t know, Is that this smile is for you. I love being with you, I love it when you hold me tight. Will, I’ve told him goodbye, Because I want to be with you. I’m putting my faith in your promises, Please, don’t back out on them now. For anyone that posts in Explorer, you know that I'm having a rough time lately, and the issue with Justin is just one of them. I'm trying to work forward, and I'm trying as well to get thru everything else, but this year is becoming overwhelming for me. Those girls on TV don't know that being |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Best of luck with the future too, Tamma. We're all pulling for you. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This might be one of your best poems, or probably your best so far. Talking about Passions in Poetry. This is it. hope things go your way soon Tamma. good luck "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I understand that times must be hard for ya right now. I wish you all the luck I can give. I can only hope that things get better for you. Good luck. I liked this poem a lot. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
i was hoping u would come back..and you did, i was getting worried for a lil while there..good poem...and hope everything turns out for the best *KiM* " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
I don't know you, Tamma, 'cause I just came here, but I hope the best for you. Nice poem! *TiMMYBoY* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done Tamma....Glad to see you posting I hope things get ok with you soon....I'm here for you gal! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yeah... I'm glad you're still posting. I'm sorry for your problems, boys and feelings can be a real pain. Good luck with everything. This was really good. "I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
be strong, keep writing ab *~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~* |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Nice -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Tamma, may your year be far less, uh, painful than mine was/is. From August 25, 2000(and a little b4 then) and on has been complete and total hell for me. I'm here if you ever want to talk. Good poem. I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't. |
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