Teen Poetry #4 |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Within life I find death, A million broken hearts placed upon my chest, All is sad no hope to give, I join them soon was my life a fib?, Gone are the day that I loved so dear, Yet with my life I just perveser, Just a life less carcuss for the world to see, And all I wanted was just to have her near me, Bell stricked the deathly toll, Off into hell my tormented body goes, Never again to see the early light, Gone are the day within wrong and right, Endless days that I stay, Hellish torment day until day, Never really a consept of time, Just endless suriffing Forever. Lead me not into temptation, |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I hope that you can like this because unitl I can get things going my was this is abou the best I can come up with. I really don't know what the future holds for me I do know that I am trying to join the National Guards at the end of this month so wish me luck you'all Lead me not into temptation, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good luck in joining the NG! Good poem to....me likes. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*hugs mike* good luck hun!!! and nice i liked it muchs. tiff |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow.. I guess all I can say is good luck. I wish you the best... Very nice poem. I enjoyed it very much. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Malinda tells me you're huge (like a tree!), so you'll do fine. hehe Go kick some fanny, bro. As for the poem, watch that spelling. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
thanks everyone it will be hard for me I know but I will do it I belive and alan yes she is right I am like 6"10 or around there take it easy Lead me not into temptation, |
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