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Ski*Chick
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since 2001-01-13

Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

0 posted 2001-04-19 11:55 PM

We all as ourselfs whats a friendship,
so one day I looked up the word frienship
it said a person who likes another
I was then thinking of a friend of mine
who is like that..

I had to tell her I might move to Finland,,
after I graduate it hurt the both of us
because we could talk forever if there was a forever
she cares about me I care about her
I then asked my self what does care mean?
it means that one watch's the other
thats what Kelly and I do.

I look up words that describe
a frienship and will make a good poem
we talk about everything and anything
when we pass in the hall ways in school I smile
and when someones talking behind my back she tells me,
I'd do the same.

Good Luck Kelly where ever you go in life,
your my best friend in the world
with the endless phone calls
at 4am
thank you for everything.

Your friend,

Minna

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-04-20 01:17 AM

this was a nice tribute.
i liked it.
hope u gave this to her..
well...i haven't seen u around..
keep in touch in the forums
and keep writing

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 04-20-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-04-20 02:35 AM

Wonderful tribute. I enjoyed it and I bet she did/will too.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

3 posted 2001-04-20 10:29 AM

Nice poem. It's the best thing in the world to have a good friend. Don't lose that, even if you do move to Finland. Great job
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

4 posted 2001-04-20 12:50 PM

This is a really nice tribute, very sweet. i thought that this was really well written, but that it sounded a little less poetic and a little more like prose. i think that you might want to try this in a prose form, but that's just me. anyway, good job on this, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-04-20 12:53 PM

I'll agree with Ban on this one. It sounds more like porse than poetry. But you still did a very nice job expressing your thoughts. It's a beautiful tribute, and I hope your friend liked this as much as I did. Thanks for sharing.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-04-20 01:48 PM

hey Minna....wonderful tribute to your friend. I hope you 2 stay friends forever

thanks for sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

7 posted 2001-04-20 07:59 PM

It does seem a bit like prose, doesn't it?

No complaint here though, she did put it in line form after all.
The product is not a bad one, Minna. The line sizes could be brought more closely together.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

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