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Love's Addiction
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 57
all around you

0 posted 2001-06-21 10:49 PM

this is my first post so tell me what u think!

This is no lie,
he won me over in a blink of an eye.
He came over and stole my heart,
he looked at me, and I fell apart.
I fell in love with his every touch,
I just love him so very much.
He's into the kinda stuff that I am,
and in his compliments, all day, I swam.
We flirt so much, I love it so,
I think I'm in love, he has a girlfriend though.
So what am I gonna do now?
I want to have his love, but how?...........

if love wants me, then it can come find me

obscurity of cloud
Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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1 posted 2001-06-21 10:54 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! This is a great start, such a sad topic. I hope to see you posting in the future!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-06-21 11:02 PM

Welcome!!

I liked this I remember this too ugh....sticky....if he is flirting heavy enjoy it....the girlfriend sounds to be on her way out........

Cinch01
Junior Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 14
RS, BR

3 posted 2001-06-21 11:36 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!

Great poem! Same situation here, what are the odds of that happening? I know what are you going through and I couldn't have it said in a better way. Hope you write more!

"Love like yuo never been hurt, live like today was the last day and dance like no one is watching."

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-06-21 11:57 PM

WELOCME TO PASSIONS!!...i really liked how you written this

...great job...i enjoyed this a LOT...i hope see you read share and reply more...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-06-22 12:25 PM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry! This is a great first post. I really enjoyed it.. the emotions you portrayed were excellent. Very nice work. I look forward to seeing more of you around here in posts and replies.
Nicely done.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising... so this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." -James

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-06-22 05:23 AM

Welcome to Passions!
I really enjoyed this one! I hope to see you around posting and replying. I look forward to seeing your poems in the future!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

7 posted 2001-06-22 12:10 PM

Welcome to Passions. As you can see, we have an enthusiastic welcoming committee. I enjoyed you first post, and look forward to more!!

*~*Amanda*~*

I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.
Why couldn't I stop until I had died?
It was hate

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

8 posted 2001-06-23 04:38 PM

Welcome to Passions this is a really good first post, I really enjoyed the read. Hope you enjoy your time here as much as I do and hope to see more of your work soon

Andrew

Love's Addiction
Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 57
all around you

9 posted 2001-06-23 05:00 PM

thanks all, i'm sure i'm gonna enjoy it here

if love wants me, then it can come find me
if music was a weapon, many ppl would be dead

FoxXena
Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

10 posted 2001-06-24 02:50 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! This is a great start and I hope to see more of you around.

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

11 posted 2001-06-25 02:01 AM

Sorry I got to this one kinda late...but I know exactly how you feel so I had to reply.
Though everyone has mentioned this before I still feel obliged to say WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! This was a great first post and I am looking forward to reading more of your work!
~Nikki~

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