Teen Poetry #4 |
O' Small One ( Dedicated to my little sister) |
Jess714 Junior Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 10 |
O' Small one, you are a light Able to turn on When we want you to fight O'Small one, you are bright Able to be smart When you want to be smart O' Small One, you can be dark Don't get on your black side Don't want to see that witch in you O'Small one, you can fade When you are tired and weak Quiet when you fall alseep |
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Rach813 Junior Member
since 2001-04-17
Posts 30Maine |
Sis this is such a great poem to describe Becca! Fits her great and you write great poems! Keep up the good work and always remember I love you! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This poem put a big smile in my face thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
this is cute, keep writing :o) ~AB~ *~Sometimes just holding hands is holding on to everything.~* |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Oh don't we just love those little creatures...er....angels...Heh...very sweet poem. ~Carly There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 04-18-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Awwww i wish I had a little sis......i'd have someone to beat on.... hehe jk Beautiful poem I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
lol very nicely put and very sweetish! i only have an older sis but im gettin' a younger step sis soon *is scared* so ill prolly learn just how u feel pretty quickly! thanx muchs, ~*'TifF'*~ |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
That is sweet. I'm the youngest, how come I never get a poem written about me? Oh wait, thats cuz my siblings arent poets! I dont know you sister, but that poem is really cute. *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very sweet, Jess. I think it's a very beautiful tribute to your little sister Nicely done. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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