Teen Poetry #4 |
Billy |
Mysteria-Foxx Junior Member
since 2001-04-09
Posts 11 |
There was once a time when me and Billy sang on the back of the bus old songs from the 60's and threw jelly beans at the driver and hid behind our seats when he turned around It was obviously us... we laughed so hard Ride our bikes up to 7-11 and buy a chocolate cake brought it to the baseball fields and ate it with our hands Whatever we didn't eat ended up in each other's face Mom hated it when I did that "Crazy girl", she'd say Simply crazy Billy moved to Florida and mailed me post cards of Mickey We'd call each other and sing the same old songs I danced around in my underwear and wondered if I'd ever get to see him dance again "I'm dancin', Fox, dancin' still." In the summer of 96 was when I spoke to him last Sweet Billy drifted away I hope he's dancing still Back in 97 we burned our own souls in the midst of poverty. Never learned how to keep anything clean. [This message has been edited by Mysteria-Foxx (edited 04-12-2001).] |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Wow! this is a really great first post. you have a lot of talent and i know you will love it here at passions. i look forward to reading lots more in the future. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Welcome to Passions! This is a really good 1st post. I will be waiting for the next. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh My God, this is simply amazing. Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wowish! This was such an amazing poem. You've impressed me quite a bit with this post. I hope to see you more often here! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." [This message has been edited by Linc (edited 04-12-2001).] |
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Mysteria-Foxx Junior Member
since 2001-04-09
Posts 11 |
Thanks a lot you guys! I already feel so welcome here. I wasn't sure if you'd like this one. I write about the past a lot because I did a lot of wacky stuff. Thanks again! Back in 97 we burned our own souls in the midst of poverty. Never learned how to keep anything clean. |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Yeah, i have to agree with the others on this one, it was really good. welcome to passions. *S* Staci |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wacky=Awesome. This was just that, and I can't wait for more!! Welcome welcome welcome!! And check your email for a koo message. ~Carly (Moderator) NOTE TO SELF: Live to love and love to live. |
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AsBurYAnGel Junior Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 14Virginia |
This was a good first post. Hope to see more. Welcome to Passions. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome to Passions Oh, now this one is cool, that ending is so, so......touching. Great job on this poem, I hope you enjoy it here, that was a great first post! "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I did like this one quite a bit! The ending was quite touching, yes. A lovely tribute to a friend. Welcome to Passions in Poetry. ~Allan Concieted?? Impossible! That would be a fault! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions! This is an amazing first post! I can't wait to read more from you! You're going to be a fine addition to PIP. Welcome --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Nice to see you've decided to join our family here in Passions for Poetry. Hopey you enjoy reading as well as sharing. Happy posting "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Welcome to the Passions family. Looks like you will fit right in. Great first post. *If the only place I can live my dreams is in my sleep, then I'll sleep forever!* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Better late than never! Welcome to Pips! I see a lot of creativity in your writing, pen on! Enjoyed your poem very much. ~*~ If the want a rainbow ~ you have to put up with a little rain ~*~ |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
hey welcome to passions and this is a good 1st read! sounds like me...back in the day haha you just showed one awsome way of remembering memories good job..and kepp posting, ill be looking for your new stuff!!! <3 ~*KiMmIe*~ " im surrounded by people, but yet im still all alone" |
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