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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Bird Song. Awoken by the chatter of birdsong I lay still Staring into the darkness, pondering future’s Waiting for the dawn, Lonely I lie dreaming Dreaming of you and our first embrace Longing for our first kiss Shivers run through me Like lightning to earth Conscious of nothing but your breathing I die a hundred times over My heart stopped still I am in love Cold and lonely, Yearning to hold you. Another really old one... <<<_Andrew_>>> " No Army can conquer a galaxy, yet faith alone can overturn the universe." |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Ah love, opener of eyes and stabber of knifes... You really do start noticing things more after you fall in love, shame there not all as pleasant as birdsong... Cool beans man, keep it up. Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
oooooohhh....that was really good I love it such passions is shown in this poem gotta love it  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done! I really loved the ending on this one. Gave me the feeling you were experiencing unrequited love? ANyway, I enjoyed this.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very nice.. I liked it. Good job. --Marie subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This was good... a very old one. So tell us, Zu, how are things now? Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
*bump*...to page one what a great poem  ...very emotional and sincere...nice work here...thanks for the read...  ...?ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hmmmm....thank you for this little peep into your personality... |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I really like this piece... full of emotion and truth.. the best kind! I really like the style you used on this one, too. Great piece, thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Ooh this a blast from the past... and everything is fine Allan... very different from when I posted this. |
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