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princess^sarah
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0 posted 2001-04-18 01:48 AM


i've decided to post a whole set of poems each one bout a different person in PIP!

if u dont want me to write one  bout u feel free to email me at rammstein_chick@hotmail.com !

this one is bout anonymous_female....

You are a great friend of mine
a friend i love and care for
no matter where you are
or who you are
or what you do
you'll always have my shoulder to cry on.
when times are bad
and your really down and out
just call me name
and i'll be there for you,
with my shoulder for you to cry on!



© Copyright 2001 sarah alford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-18 03:09 AM


Awwwww that's such an AWESOME idea Sarah!
AF is great! I love her to death!
Such a wonderful tribute!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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2 posted 2001-04-18 03:44 AM


this one was a great tribute to af!!
even though...
it wasn't as great as mine
anywyas..another great job and its totally awesome to think something like that..
keep writing

banburycross
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viginia
3 posted 2001-04-18 12:11 PM


Wow, that is a really great idea for a series and a very sweet thought.  i like this a lot, i look forward to reading lots more from you.  keep posting all your work  

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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4 posted 2001-04-18 03:59 PM


  Wow hey! Hey wow! Great idea!! I liked this a lot, can't wait to read the others!
  ~Carly

There is pleasure in poetic pains which only poets know......~Unknown

Low Man's Lyric
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5 posted 2001-04-18 04:09 PM




What a nice thing to do. Nothing beats good friends and good poems  


Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend."  
~Anonymous

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6 posted 2001-04-19 10:13 AM


Awww.. what a greta idea!  That's going to be a very good series.. I can't wait to read more.  Nice job, Sarah, I'm sure AF likes the poem as much as we do.
Nicely done.

--Marie

subconsciously, i think i can eat so much to make my stomach hurt, instead of my heart.

Allan Riverwood
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7 posted 2001-04-19 11:48 AM


This should be interesting...     Just don't be too graphic when you do mine.
Excellent job on this, Sarah.  You are such a sweetie, and we love you to death.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

princess^sarah
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8 posted 2001-04-20 07:41 PM


AWWWWWWWW *runs up to everyone in PIP and cuddles them lovingly...
i wuv all u guys!!!  

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9 posted 2001-04-22 11:42 AM


Awwww this was so sweet!!!!!!!!!! Very cute princess  
Bishop
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10 posted 2001-04-22 12:53 PM


Nice1    very very good.  a nice sweet poem

^*Bishop*^

*Evil has many faces, and I'm one of them*

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11 posted 2001-04-22 12:58 PM


Sarah, chop chop.......we need more poems about other members.....chip chop chop chip chop!!!


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12 posted 2001-04-22 05:36 PM


How sweeeeeetttt. hehe
Keep it up!

Jenn

"I've come too close to happiness, to have it swept away,don't think I can take the pain, never fall again..." Janet

sweetstuff101
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13 posted 2001-04-22 07:44 PM


thats sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeett!!! Don't u just love friends??? Friends are the best!!! Keep writing!!

Luv Always,  
  SweetStuff

SuMdAy U'll CrY 4 mE bUt I wOn'T cRy 4 U, sUmDaY U'll MiSs Me LiKe I MiSsD U, SuMdAy Ull nEeD mE LiKe I nEeDed U, sUmDaY U'll lUv Me BuT I wOn'T LuV U

Suga_Baby
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14 posted 2001-04-22 08:17 PM


Hi, Sarah, I don't believe we've met! Sooo... Hi! I'm Sara   This is such a cute idea and a very cute poem to kick it off... hope the rest are just as good!  

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

sleepymoongirl
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15 posted 2001-04-22 09:33 PM


that was a cool poem sounds like u be an awesome friend

as u go in life there will be ur hardships it is up to u if it makes u or breaks u.  

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16 posted 2001-04-26 05:57 PM


You have shown such a beautiful heart.  Keep it up Sarah.  Keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

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with you
17 posted 2001-04-26 06:14 PM


this really is wonderfully sweet  
anonymousfemale
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18 posted 2001-07-01 10:36 AM


OH MY GOD! I can't believe I missed this one!!!

Sarah, you're so nice. Thank you tons.  

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

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19 posted 2001-07-03 08:53 PM


like dope says
"CHOP CHOP MORE MORE WE SAY"
hehe  
hi sarah

"At nude weddings everybody can see the best man!" "I have a glass house with no windows" "save a horse, ride a cowboy!!!"

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